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chair in my friends yard..

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The chair does a very well job at being menacing and intimidating. The angle from which the photo was taken is extremely affective in portraying the mood of the overall picture.

Although not the most original photo I've seen, it has a curious way at being new and makes the viewer question and have a feeling of new familiarity, which goes along with the theme very well.

In respects with the execution of photography, I think your teqnique could be improved on. The stark blue sky is really eye capturing, however, the trees and metal object in the background take away from the subject of the chair.

As I said before, the mood, in my opinion, is the strongest aspect of the piece. You did a marvellous job at capturing emotion through angle, texture of the chair and its surroundings, and atmosphere (the blue sky against brown everything else). Very strong, although I think it could have been even more impactful if the subject stood out even more by removing clutter.

Overall, I think has the potential for an amazing photo theme and subject wise, but some work in teqnique and skill still has to be done.
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this is very nice (:
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Thank you! :bug:

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when all the animals have been hunted,
when all the waters are polluted,
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